Some believe that younger family members should be legally responsible for supporting older family members when they become physically, mentally and financially unable to look after themselves. Do you agree or disagree?
Some citizens believed that young family members must many obligations
be legally pressure
to take Change the verb form
be legally pressured
care
of their eldery
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elderly
people
if they get sick, dependent or unable to take care
for
themselves. Change preposition
of
This
essay agrees with this
statement because taking care
of our parents
and family member is a moral action that needs to be done and it is the right thing to do.
To begin
with, young adults have a moral debt with
their Change preposition
to
parents
who support them in so many ways when they were children. Parents
had the social and moral obligations to not abandon their family because it is totally unacceptable. Besides
, it is the time for young generations to give back to their parents
and family all the love and protection that has been given. For instance
, in the USA there are multiple entities that entitle parents
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to
such
as phychological
, and Correct your spelling
psychological
moral
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morally
behave
while they have their children with them or they might Replace the word
behaviour
lost
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lose
be lost
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their parent's
parent's
custody. As result, as well as them these laws asked Fix the agreement mistake
parents'
parents
to protect their children, so young adults must have the same obligation to love their parents
and extended families.
Second
reason, supporting our family members Add an article
The second
A second
it
is the right thing to do because that gives them the opportunity to be a better Correct pronoun usage
apply
person
. It feels good to give them all the support and protection because Fix the agreement mistake
people
this
offers a way to evolve as a human beings
. Correct the article-noun agreement
human beings
a human being
Moreover
, most of
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apply
people
get sick because they have no mental balance, so they ignore what Add an article
the people
it
is the right thing to do. Correct pronoun usage
apply
For instance
, Fullerton University,
presented statistics Remove the comma
apply
which
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that
comfirm
that Correct your spelling
confirm
people
who are generous and take care
of their loved ones have more balance and mental health in theri
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their
there
the
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lives
life
lifes
. On top of Correct your spelling
lives
this
, younger people
who give support to their older family members helps
to form better future generations because Change the verb form
help
people
learn from actions.
To conclude, young relatives should be legally obligated to take care
of their loved ones because it helps to create a healthy balance in people
's souls and also
younger generations will set a great example to those who followed them.Submitted by cuevas14dic on
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