Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
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this
modern and digital era, we are more associated technology
and mostly Change preposition
with technology
the
mobile devices like Correct article usage
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phone
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phones
tablet
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tablets
laptop
. Using these devices brings Fix the agreement mistake
laptops
lot
of Change the article
a lot
opportunity
to advertise. These advertisements Change to a plural noun
opportunities
comes
with their Change the verb form
come
possitive
and negative points, I will discuss my views on the good and bad effects of ads.
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positive
Firstly
, let us discuss that viewing lot
of promotions about the products
that reallu
are not Correct your spelling
really
impotant
. We Correct your spelling
important
stuck
in the web of Add a missing verb
are stuck
materilised
marketing. Due to appealing offers and attractive Correct your spelling
materialised
so called
"Add a hyphen
so-called
benefits
" people often buy Add a comma
,benefits
lot
of needless Change the article
a lot
products
. Buying these unnecessery
goods increases Correct your spelling
unnecessary
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financial
finacial
burden on the Correct article usage
the finacial
personals
. Replace the word
personnel
Further
to this
, it is also
waste
of money, time and resources that ultimately impacts our environment. Correct article usage
a waste
For example
, the mobile phone with fan
. It is marketed in the name of Add an article
a fan
the fan
technology
however
it was completely impracticle
and useless.
On the other side, some Correct your spelling
impractical
products
are life
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a life
changer
. Considering, Fix the agreement mistake
changers
lot
of marketing and media agencies are using Artificial Change the article
a lot
Intelligance
based Correct your spelling
Intelligence
technology
to place promotions and ads. While using internet
, people came to know Add an article
the internet
the
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that
technology
and product make their life so easy and comfortable. For example
, seeing an ad for electric
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an electric
chair
for disabled/Fix the agreement mistake
chairs
handicap
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handicapped
person
with improved Fix the agreement mistake
persons
fuctionality
might help Correct your spelling
functionality
lot
of Change the article
a lot
specially abled
persons. Another example would be a cooker cum fryer for kitchen, it can solve and address many travellers problems.
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I have discussed my opinions based upon my experience and knowledge. I would say using AI and Correct your spelling
Hereby
technology
ads can make big
impact on a life of humans. On Add an article
a big
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the other
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another
side
if promotions and Add a comma
,side
products
are not properly placed and evaluated before marketing it makes loss
of people's money and time.Add an article
the loss
a loss
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