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Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right and what is wrong, so that they can behave. Others say that teachers should only teach students academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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There are enormous
students
 who prefer to work while studying. Due to
this
, they feel under pressure, as they do not get enough
time
 for their study.
This
 matter can be resolved by taking some appropriate steps.
This
 essay will elaborate
the
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 causes and
its
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 possible solutions in the ensuing paragraphs. Discussing the reasons, the most common one is that
students
 want to provide financial support to their family as in most
of
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the
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families there is only one wage earner.
Thus
 it is difficult to fulfil the needs of all the members. The other cause is that
students
 have to take
burden
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 of their job and education simultaneously on their young shoulders. Resultantly, they feel extreme pressure and mental stress.
Moreover
, some adolescents want to achieve their goals and dreams at
early
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 age.
For instance
, many
students
 prefer to do internships to acquire their professional field’s experience. As to the viable solutions, I feel the most potent would be the government to introduce some beneficial schemes and scholarships to support the working
students
 economically.
Therefore
, they can start their career and help their family by earning as well as studying.
Additionally
, they can perform
time
 management practices, physical exercise, and early morning meditation to overcome unwanted mental stress and pressure.
Furthermore
, spending quality
time
 with family, friends and near ones plays an essential role in resolving these kinds of issues. To wrap up the aforementioned discussion, working while studying is stressful for the
students
,
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 because they have to focus on both at the same
time
.
However
, it can be resolved with the help of
government’s
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 schemes, family support and managing their
time
.
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