A friend of yours is thinking of going to a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter, Explain why you think your friend would enjoy camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go on camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Tom, Hope everything is well. Glad to hear that you are going on a camping holiday

this

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summer to

London

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the London

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scape region. I have

being

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been

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there

last

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year and enjoyed

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it a

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lot so I hope you

also

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be able to get the similar excitement. Since

this

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is your

first

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time in a summer camp you will gain

lot

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a lot

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of experience in how to do a bonfire and to install a tent to stay the night.

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it is exciting, please make sure to take a cap and a tube of sun-cream to protect

from

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yourself from

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the sun.

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year I experienced dark patches once I came back.

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, please make sure to take a pair of boots, since

the

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apply

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mountain climbing is a tedious task. Sometimes you may feel

headache

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a headache

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hence

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make sure to keep some paracetamol in your hand luggage. I am

also

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keen on joining

with

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apply

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you

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year

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, so please inform me if there is any room

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the bus and eagerly waiting for your reply. Yours,

Susitha

Correct your spelling

Susitna

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

172 words

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