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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory part of high school programmes. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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There are many ways for
school
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 to equip their pupils to face the future. Some
people
 argue that one of the effective strategies to do is encouraging them to do volunteering activities as a part of
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 curriculum. I personally agree if
this
 scheme is applied as it will not only help other’s life but
also
 boost the social skill of the
students
.
Firstly
, getting involved in a volunteering service will widen
students
’ networking because they work with
people
 out of their circle.
This
 will teach them how to make new friends and commit to a community which is important to build a bright career in the future. I recall the moment when I was in college and contributed to a dental charity held by a church in Surabaya. Through
this
 activity, I had an opportunity to work with priests and nuns, which I had never imagined before as a Moslem.
As a result
, we still managed to maintain the relationship after the event by doing several projects together.
Secondly
, it is largely believed that community service will improve
people
’s quality of life. High
school
students
 can be part of
this
 improvement by gathering fundraising to provide meals and blankets for homeless
people
 in their
neighbourhood
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.
This
 program will help the vulnerable group to get food and basic needs as hunger and homelessness are still major problems.
Furthermore
,
this
 activity can raise
students
’ empathy because they directly witness the homeless’ struggle. Empathy later will inspire
students
 to take positive action in order to make the world a better place to live. To sum up, I support the idea to make community service
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a mandatory programme in high
school
 to develop the social ability of
students
 as well as give social support to
people
 who need it the most. (299 words)
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