You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, tell him which team won describe the conditions on the day say how you felt about the match

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Dear Milos, I am so sad that you couldn't help us

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weekend when we played in the regional finals. I wonder how are you feeling since I heard you have seriously injured your leg. The regional finals game was great. We barely managed to win the game by three points, with a

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shot in the end. It was very hot in the gym since the AC unit malfunctioned at the start of the

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half. Everyone was sweaty and drinking tons of water, including the crowd on the stands. It was definitively one of the most memorable games of

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season. Our team started a bit slow in the beginning but picked up the pace in the

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half. The

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couple of minutes were nerve-wracking, because of the many defensive mistakes we've made. I had a gut feeling we are going to lose, but luckily I was wrong. I hope you will recover soon, and retake your centre position for the

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season. Everybody misses you, and hope you will come back better than ever. Kind regards, Ognjen Rankovic

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

182 words

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