Your local council is considering closing a sport and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council, in your letter, - Give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre. - Explain the why the centre is important for the local community. - Describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closed.

Dear sir, I am Vani, living in apartment B at Newton. I am writing
this
letter to express my disappointment regarding the decision of shutting down only
sports
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and leisure centre we have in Newton. I go there
everyday
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for an evening walk with my mom. And
also
my brother and his friends
plays
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there cricket on weekends.
That is
the only place to take our minds off from stress. We get
chance
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a chance
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to meet our neighbours there. Meeting with newton people should be held to reconcile the cost per person to join in. If it helps to rechange your decision regarding closing the sports centre. Hoping for
a
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careful consideration of
this
suggestion. Yours faithfully Vaani
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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