In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Today, human beings are facing a huge amount of
advertisement
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advertisements
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either
in
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internet
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the internet
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or in their routine life. Actually, it means that
advertisement
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the main strong “weapon” in
business
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the business
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industry. So companies in order to gain more attention and high profit
trying
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to highlight their products showing that it is something new among other similar goods.
However
, boosting the products
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this
way might
also
have demerits. So in
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I will give the main reasons and
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discus
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both sides. It is clear that the probability of one particular merchandise
to be
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bestseller
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a bestseller
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without any
advertisement
is poor.
Therefore
, many brands are trying to show off their staff in
new
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a new
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way by changing the shape and cover or even creating something unusual and exclusive one of a kind.
For instance
, the electronic brand Samsung was the
first
to create a smartphone with a feature like water resistance and advertised it emphasizing that it is
novice
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thing for
world
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the world
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.
As a result
, it
lead
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to increasing the offers and becoming word wide popular gadget.
On the contrary
, misusing
this
kind of
advertisement
might bring negative effects and could greatly harm the reputation of a particular company. If a product is advertised that it has some new unique features or made from
unusual
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an unusual
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material,
however
indeed it
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of that options, it could lead to hate of customers and bad negative comments.
Consequently
, misusing the abovementioned
advertisement
could play a great unpleasant role in the reliability of companies. To conclude, showing off the goods in
this
way
have
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both advantages and disadvantages, but using it wisely and on purpose depends on companies whether they want
bright
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a bright
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future or not.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Innovation
  • Fast-paced
  • Distinguishing
  • Psychological aspect
  • Inherently
  • Perceived
  • Continuous improvement
  • Revolutionary
  • Feasible
  • Throwaway culture
  • Undervalue
  • Longevity
  • Obscure
  • Novelty
  • Unsatisfactory
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