You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with family fr 6 months and look after their 6-months old child. Write a letter to the parents: Explain why you would like the job. Give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ Say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with reference to your advertisement in the magazine regarding the child care required for your six-month-old baby and I would like to be considered for the position.

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with, I am very fond of kids and pursuing my career as a Nanny for the

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6 years. Presently, I am working for an Irish family as a caretaker of their two kids whose ages vary from 2 and 4. I have completed a diploma in child development and am competent to take responsibility for juveniles.

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, I am a jovial person who

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loves travelling and discovering new locations. I have never been to Australia before and am very thrilled to explore the Country. In my free time, I will wander in the city, find out restaurants that serve good delicacies, and will do the shopping and make new friends. I am available to appear for an online interview at your convenience and look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Ms Neha Jaiswal

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

173 words

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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has change because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

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