In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move out of the cities and into regional areas. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

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two or three decades,

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and businesses have been raising more tremendously than ever before due to globalization.

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, many nations' cities has become

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business area,

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, some state's ministry

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motivated these sectors to depart into the regional locations from the megacities. I think

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trend has more benefits than drawbacks and that essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons. There are numerous benefits to moving the regional venues from the urban areas which are industries. One of the major advantages is that the metropolitan place's air pollution might be reduced significantly which means the heavy vehicles and industrial's emissions are the main culprits of the polluting air. Another main

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is that

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congestion could be diminished when these

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might be moved out into the

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venus from the

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, the Mumbai state of India, facing innumerable traffic jams' trouble due to it contains

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these sectors should be moved from the cities into the countryside. There are some drawbacks to the

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moving into the rural sides from the megacities. One of the major disadvantages is that country's place will become polluted when these happen,

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, agriculture form might be affected by the industrial wastages. Another

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is that transportation costs will be raised, so enterprises might be increased

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their products

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while consumers can suffer that.

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, India's Yippe noodles company has changed to their location in recently after that, they have increased their product price which means they can cover all the extra expenses by raising goods cost.

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these enterprises should not move into the regional venues from the megacities. To conclude, when all things considered, I am convinced that the thing indicated the merits of the traffic and pollution might be reduced; the countryside and product's cost affected is the demerits.

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, I think that situation has more merits than demerits. I believe that the businesses should be started in the regional place from the starting.