The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.

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part of our life.

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, many people are choosing to earn from multiple resources by leaving behind the old fashioned thought process of

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career. I am completely in line with the idea of doing different jobs at

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essay, I will discuss my point of view with

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, choosing multiple

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, will not only give you financial benefits but

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you ways to learn and grow fast in the desired area. Apart from these advantages it

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improves

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security. Let's say, you lost a

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due to any reason and if you have some backup earning

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, you could

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another stable

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runs a medical store along with the

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he is doing at

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company. I can see that he is getting income from two different sources and it made him financially stable and secure. Though, working for multiple goals and jobs are not easy. The idea

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has some disadvantages. For some extra income, people

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to invest more

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. It negatively impacts

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work-life balance. As I mentioned in

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needs to spend

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3 to 4 hours after returning from his primary

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. Sometimes

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becomes stressful for him and it may cause family conflicts.

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, doing multiple jobs and generating income from multiple sources are good to have

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keep in your mind that the

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you are investing is from your personal family

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. If the idea is worked-out and executed in

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way, it can be

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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290 words

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The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.

Fully explain your ideas

Advertisements play a major role on TV in market economics. Despite the benefits of such information, many people criticize the role of TV advertising. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Some people think that childcare centers provide the best services for children of preschool age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that University students should specialise in a particular subject, while others believe that they should study a range of subjects discuss both the views and give your opinion.