Some people think that the main purpose of school is to turn children into good citizens and workers rather than to benefit them as individuals

The vast majority of

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deems that the fundamental duty of the school is to convert graders into decent dwellers and employees rather than to improve them as individuals.

Although

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, I think that the

schools

also

should care about each

children

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as

individuals

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. On the one hand, it is essential

children

are prepared to be members of society. Education gives students more skills and knowledge.

Likewise

, well-educated

children

can learn to be independent as well as

this

helps to find work. In

this

way,

children

become altruistic people, they tend to contribute positively to society.

Moreover

, the

schools

aim to teach

young

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generation moral values

such

as tolerance and sharing.

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, our school curriculums include respecting teachers as well as other junior and senior graders, doing their homework, keeping

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and loving their motherland.

On the other hand

, emphasizing the capacity of each child helps to blossom hidden abilities. If

schools

implements

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this

tendency, most graders can know anything related to their favourite subject as well as they will be professional trainees in the future.

Furthermore

, a huge number of students prefer to study as individuals.

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, among schoolers conducted a survey about which one better general or individual study in the one school of the UK.

This

research showed that almost

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70% of students voted

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letter. In conclusion, I think both of them play a vital role in our society.

However

,

schools

should turn kids into good citizens and trainees.