Some people think that the main purpose of school is to turn children into good citizens and workers rather than to benefit them as individuals

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deems that the fundamental duty of the school is to convert graders into decent dwellers and employees rather than to improve them as individuals.

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, I think that the

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should care about each

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. On the one hand, it is essential

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are prepared to be members of society. Education gives students more skills and knowledge.

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, well-educated

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can learn to be independent as well as

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helps to find work. In

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way,

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become altruistic people, they tend to contribute positively to society.

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, the

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aim to teach

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generation moral values

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as tolerance and sharing.

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, our school curriculums include respecting teachers as well as other junior and senior graders, doing their homework, keeping

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and loving their motherland.

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, emphasizing the capacity of each child helps to blossom hidden abilities. If

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tendency, most graders can know anything related to their favourite subject as well as they will be professional trainees in the future.

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, a huge number of students prefer to study as individuals.

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, among schoolers conducted a survey about which one better general or individual study in the one school of the UK.

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research showed that almost

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70% of students voted

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letter. In conclusion, I think both of them play a vital role in our society.

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,

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should turn kids into good citizens and trainees.