In some countries family and friends who care for the elderly do not find time to look after them. What are the reasons and solutions?
In many parts of the world, most
people
find problems looking after their elders. There Use synonyms
is
various reasons behind Change the verb form
are
this
and steps are needed to ensure that Linking Words
masses
find a way to care about their old family members.
The reasons why some Correct article usage
the masses
people
neglect to look at elderly Use synonyms
people
. Use synonyms
Firstly
, nowadays, everyone is busy and has a hectic schedule, they have a job to do that Linking Words
need
Correct subject-verb agreement
needs
time
Use synonyms
due to
Linking Words
this
they come late from the office, in that case, they do not have Linking Words
time
to look after their elderly members. Use synonyms
Secondly
, children are their first priority to look after. To illustrate, many mothers have twins and few have triplets Linking Words
therefore
, newborn babies need more Linking Words
time
with their mothers because they need proper Use synonyms
time
and food.
Use synonyms
Although
, there are steps to overcome Linking Words
this
issue. Linking Words
To begin
with, Linking Words
some
Correct your spelling
sometimes the
time
masses should take work from home when their elderly parents need them in owning Use synonyms
this
they both get some quality Linking Words
time
with each other. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the caretaker is one of the options that are helpful in difficult times. Linking Words
Whereas
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,
an individual visit Remove the comma
apply
to
another city or country Change preposition
apply
of
their job Change preposition
for
then
they could contact Linking Words
with
nurses or caretakers to look after them in their absence Change preposition
apply
For example
, in India in a recent survey, the figure of caretakers are increasing for elderly Linking Words
people
because their children are lived in other cities and countries for Use synonyms
job
and proportion is raised up to 20% . Add an article
the job
a job
In addition
to Linking Words
this
, they should teach their elders to operate smartphones Linking Words
due to
Linking Words
this
they can contact at any Linking Words
time
and order from the online market when they need something.
Use synonyms
To conclude
, " every lock has its key." Linking Words
However
, the young generation should understand Linking Words
this
elderly person just want to spend some Linking Words
time
with them and it should Use synonyms
their
responsibility to look after them later age.Add a missing verb
be their
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