In some countries family and friends who care for the elderly do not find time to look after them. What are the reasons and solutions?
In many parts of the world, most
people
find problems looking after their elders. There is
various reasons behind Change the verb form
are
this
and steps are needed to ensure that masses
find a way to care about their old family members.
The reasons why some Correct article usage
the masses
people
neglect to look at elderly people
. Firstly
, nowadays, everyone is busy and has a hectic schedule, they have a job to do that need
Correct subject-verb agreement
needs
time
due to
this
they come late from the office, in that case, they do not have time
to look after their elderly members. Secondly
, children are their first priority to look after. To illustrate, many mothers have twins and few have triplets therefore
, newborn babies need more time
with their mothers because they need proper time
and food.
Although
, there are steps to overcome this
issue. To begin
with, some
Correct your spelling
sometimes the
time
masses should take work from home when their elderly parents need them in owning this
they both get some quality time
with each other. Furthermore
, the caretaker is one of the options that are helpful in difficult times. Whereas
,
an individual visit Remove the comma
apply
to
another city or country Change preposition
apply
of
their job Change preposition
for
then
they could contact with
nurses or caretakers to look after them in their absence Change preposition
apply
For example
, in India in a recent survey, the figure of caretakers are increasing for elderly people
because their children are lived in other cities and countries for job
and proportion is raised up to 20% . Add an article
the job
a job
In addition
to this
, they should teach their elders to operate smartphones due to
this
they can contact at any time
and order from the online market when they need something.
To conclude
, " every lock has its key." However
, the young generation should understand this
elderly person just want to spend some time
with them and it should their
responsibility to look after them later age.Add a missing verb
be their
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