A lot of social problems can these days be related to teenagers. Some feel that this is because parents are not able to spend enough time and take care of their teenage child. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that a lot of social problems are directly related to teenagers due to their
parents
' lack of attention and time spent teaching and listening to their
youngsters
.
As a result
, I do agree with
this
statement wherein
this
material will outline why I believe
youngsters
social problems are correlated with their parent's attention.
First
, there is no doubt that a large portion of social complications is linked with teenagers, and when we try to see the root of these issues the majority of times their familiar circle is filled with issues and a lack of attention. To illustrate, in Ireland there is a lot of
kids
making trouble in local business in their neighbourhood where in many situations the police have to intervene.
In addition
, when checking where their
parents
are, the greater part of the time they are using drugs making it clear why these
kids
behave as
such
.
However
, if their
parents
were not on the edge of society, using narcotics but giving consideration to their
kids
normally, these
youngsters
would hardly be doing these kinds of actions.
Moreover
, in terms of
parents
not having the time to spend with their children, it possibly is due to a social problem.
For example
, as stated above with the example of
parents
who use drugs, they perhaps are the
youngsters
from the past and it may be repeated through generations.
Therefore
, if
this
issue is within society, the government should intervene by introducing social programs that help these families come back together again, removing as a consequence future problematic
kids
from the public. In conclusion,
although
there are many social obstacles correlated with youth due to the lack of mind from their
parents
, these issues might be rooted in society and need to be intervened by the government. As stated before, I do agree with
this
statement but there
is
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much more obstacles that
needs
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to be treated by the government as well.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Estrangement
  • Adolescence
  • Boundary-setting
  • Parental neglect
  • Supervision
  • Peer pressure
  • Quality time
  • Intergenerational gap
  • Cyberbullying
  • Socioeconomic factors
  • Youth delinquency
  • Mentorship
  • Family dynamics
  • Workaholism
  • Helicopter parenting
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