You recently spent a night in a hotel and had to put up with a great deal of noise very early in the morning because of a faulty central heating system. The manager promised to contact you regarding compensation but you still haven't heard from him. Write a letter to the hotel. In the letter describe the problem at the hotel explain what the manager had said at the time say what you want the manager to do.

Dear Sir or Madam,
This
letter has been penned down to express my disappointment with your resort service.
Last
week, I stayed at your hotel for a night. The ambience and food of your resort were very nice,
however
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I had to face a lot of inconvenience due to a lot of noise and sound produced by a faulty central heating system, that too in the early hours of the morning. I had to attend an online business meeting the other day on the
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contrary I was unable to join it because of lots of disturbance which affected my work as well as my reputation in front of my clients. I had already lodged a complaint which is pending unattended for the
last
2 days.
Although
the manager promised me that he would provide me compensation for all the inconvenience and loss, on the
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contrary I still have not heard anything from him yet.
Although
I am a regular customer of your hotel,
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this
has been a very dissatisfactory experience for me. I want you to look into
this
matter on a priority basis and It would be really appreciable if you can entitle me with a compensation of 30% and adjust the same in my bill amount. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Lia Brown
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