Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of University education for both individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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education

is key to success and it not only provides

knowledge

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thaught value of life. nowadays,

education

is considered as key to jobs,

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better community.so we can discuss

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both value of

knowledge

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knowledge

can be

recogonised

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recognised

recognized

through their achievement in their

education

and it helps to get

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career in their life.

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to become

doctor

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has to obtain

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degree to meet

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for a professional doctor. so they can have

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profession and decent salary for

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education

is the basic

conditon

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condition

to get a sufficient position in the job world.

However

Education

has to teach moral values and social benefits for him and a country. social skills are necessary to drive

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nations economy and well being of people.

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institutions

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to teach team leading , social wellbeing and communicative skills.

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many

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companies employees have friendly environmental workplaces and inside sports to relax, babysitter areas working parents.

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it effectively

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workforce power and

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healthy

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environment around their labours. In conclusion, based on both the point of view,

education

should teach both social value and

knowledge

to become professionals and build betterment of their life

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Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of University education for both individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

Not enough students around the world choose to study a science subject at university. what are the reasons for this? what impact does this issue have on society?

Television is dangerous because it destroys family life and any sense of community; instead of visiting people or talking with our family we just watch television. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Most people think that truth should be objective rather than subjective when it comes to news. Do you think all news true? What is the function of newspaper?

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.