Some people think that public health is the responsibility of the government while others think that people should be responsible for their own health. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

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divided

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. A group of people regard that social well being

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the priority of authority; whereas a few others claim that society should be in control

for

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their personal

health

. Prior to my

opinion

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both

the

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view would be discussed. Discussing the former opinion the supporter explain that

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begin with administration should arrange social

health

clubs. With

this

people can aware about

excercises

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exercises

exercise

and mental or physical

health

through which they will join

organization

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the organization

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of

health

and can improve their overall fitness.

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they can appoint

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health

officer

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into

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suburb

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that

it

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will go door to door for checking

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family strength and

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data. After that government should take some steps in order to improve public

health

. On the flip

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those who defend the latter view claim that.

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the person should eat

healthy

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a healthy

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diet.

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is to say that if the individual

do

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not control their eating habits of that it will

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into

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serious illnesses and

other disease

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another disease

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such

as obesity Diabetes.

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they might be check-up regular to f their

health

and take advice from experts as well as do as per suggestions of proficient doctor. Nowadays people are become aware

about

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their fitness and doing exercises and going to

gym

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. To sum up and offer my position I support

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view than the former one. It is their own body and they should take care of it by

consume

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healthy meals along with doing regular efforts

for

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upgrade their general physical

health

.