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Disruptive school students have a negative influence on others. Students who are noisy and disobedient should be grouped together and taught separately. Do you agree or disagree ?

#school #students #influence
There is no doubt that undisciplined
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 impact on others so it is considered that
students
 who are rowdy and unruly should be taught in distinct
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 and even I ponder the same . The predominant reason for supporting
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students
 breaks down the concentration of
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. Both
students
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 , while teaching if someone
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then
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 their focus on the topic and they have to restart from scratch.
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irregular
behaviour
. Since those rules should be followed by
students
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class
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 and learners lose their focus on the topic and they have to restart from scratch
Consequently
 just because of
negligence
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the negligence
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 of another person whole batch have to suffer . Heard from
this
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irregular
behaviour
. Since those Slides should be followed by
students
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unduly
usually
unruly
 so there is no need imposing, those
onthe
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on the
 whole
class
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 , they should
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 for both types of
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Furthermore
,
students
 will be isolated from each other which is harmful
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 their future since for gaining success in life they must have learned about coordination.
Also
, sometimes
students
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such
 as if
students
 spend time with disciplined people
then
 they might realize
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 of
behaviour
 and rectify their mistakes. Conclusively,
although
 an array of society Believe that
students
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behaviour
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 environment whereas I assert that they need distinct training for rectifying their
behaviour
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