Emails have had a huge impact on professional and social communication. However, their effects have been positive as well as negative. Do the advantages, of using email outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, many people experience the convenience of electronic mails as a part of their daily activities, especially for coordinating and texting.

However

, despite the

benefits

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its

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offered,

emails

have some disbenefits that threaten

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security and privacy. In

this

essay, I am going to explain both the positive and negative impacts of

emails

.

First

of all,

Emails

have many

benefits

for working and social environments.

Emails

elevate the way of communication should be, fast and reliable. Sending the messages through email can speed up the process of coordination without having to wait for two or three days. Some working environments require real-time coordination between two separate departments,

such

as

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chain and logistic industry.

For example

, Walmart stores do not have to wait for several days to get stocks confirmation from warehouses. The result is Walmart monthly revenues increase six-tenth from the past 10 years.

Furthermore

, communication between long-distance lovers can be reached within an hour without having to wait for the postman.

Secondly

, despite the

benefits

from

emails

, the drawbacks can be dangerous if the systems are weak and breachable. Privacy is threatened and the data can be stolen by hackers or irresponsible workers.

For example

, 6 months ago, a hacker was able to breach Tokopedia security systems, which is one of the leading startup companies in Indonesia. He stoles many private data that consist of one hundred million users,

such

as phone numbers, email addresses, account numbers, and the

last

password saved in the application.

This

is a big drawback from

emails

security, the reason why the hacker can steal the user's data is that there are so many flaws in email systems that

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been used by tokopedia. In conclusion,

Emails

have many

benefits

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for

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communication, especially for texting and coordination. even though there are some disbenefits from

emails

, the advancement of technology can solve it. In my opinion, the advantages of

emails

outweigh the disadvantages.