Advertising is the most commonly used tool for companies to sell their products. In what aspects of our life is advertising present? What effects can advertising have on people?

Advertising is one of the powerful techniques that not only is used by
companies
to help them to sell
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differents
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products
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but
also
is used by the governments or user institutions to inform people about specific services. In the following
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it will
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the presence of
this
marketing tool and its effects that can have on
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society. To start with, the presence of
advertisiment
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advertisement
is difficult to
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main objective is to be visible for everyone. A lot of
companies
use publicity to reach their main targets using different media
such
as television, magazines, social media, billboards and so on. to achieve a specific action
that is
aligned with the objective of the campaign, which could be to sell a product,
achive
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achieve
more followers or
suscriptions
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subscriptions
.
This
technique is very
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powerful
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it brings a lot of results to the
companies
, so as a
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consequence
is implemented everywhere. It is needless to say that adverts
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positive and negative effects on
the
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society. To start with positive ones, advertisement has an informative purpose which helps people to discover the
charcteristics
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characteristics
and functions
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specific product. What is more, it helps to be aware of upcoming sales or offers that could be of our
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.
On the other hand
, it
also
has some negative effects
such
as misleading information,
in other words
, not always all the truth about
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product is
proportinated
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. The perfect example
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this
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is Coca-Cola. Nobody knows the
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recipe
of
this
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famous
drink and what it has. All in all, advertisement is a great technique which helps different
companies
and administrations to sell and inform about certain products or services,
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people should know to recognise
an
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manipulative or misleading ad to avoid
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being part of a scam/ swindle.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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