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In many countries women no longer feel the need to get married. Some people believe that this is because women are able to earn their own income and therefore do not require the financial security that marriage can bring.To what extent do you agree?

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It is argued that females are not getting married as they earn for themselves and
also
 do not need support from a man economically. In my opinion, I do agree with the people who argue that.
This
 write-up will
further
 explain why I personally disagree.
Firstly
, In the earlier ,days ladies were not allowed to work in many countries as their only duty was to handle the house and raise the kids, even though a girl was educated enough to work, she was not encouraged to get a job and help her husband financially. But,
this
 was in past days, when things were very different, now, girls are in every sector competing with boys and taking all the challenges with a positive spirit. It is not only money that attracts females to work but
also
 the independence of living their
life
 the way they want as well as achieving their goals,
further
, full-fill their dreams.
For instance
, an Indian astronaut; KALPANA CHAWLA was a lady who created history by travelling into space
such
 examples convey a message that money is not important but goals. As above discussed, women these days delay their family engagements and marriage for their desires to achieve something in
life
. They
also
 are focused on career aspect as if they get married they have responsibilities of their family and maybe even kids
this
 may even become as obstacles in their career path.
However
, in the modern ,era it is even very difficult for girls to find a perfect groom for them as they
also
 want there would be to be as successful as them well settled even to be understanding enough to leave them and let them live their
life
 the way they wish. To conclude, In my opinion, as expected in the above paragraphs it is not because of economic stability or dependency on men for money but the career goals or the targets to achieve in
life
,
moreover
 to get the same status and respect given by the society to men.
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