Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

Sports
have the power to bring
people
together, and
as a result
, it is not surprising to see international sporting events drawing enormous crowds. Recently,
this
phenomenon has been brought to public attention with
people
standing on two different sides. On the advantage sides,
firstly
,it provides a tremendous boost for the improvement of infrastructure in the city where the event is hosted,
such
as road facilities, new hotels for boarding and lodging, swimming pools,communication facilities, new
sports
stadia, etc that too at the international standard.
Moreover
, the local
people
and
people
from other countries have a chance to
met
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.
This
is a good
opportunities
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to
introduced
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the
cutural
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cultural
and traditional of your country.
However
, hosting an international
sports
evens is has some
drawback
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, to host a major sporting event like the Olympics can cost significant sums, which have to be paid for by the taxpayer. Costs of Olympics have a tendency to rise over time and be much greater than expected. Some nations have to face financial insolvency due to huge expenditures on
sports
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event
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. In conclusion, I tend to agree with the opinion that hosting international sporting events bring a lot of benefit to the country.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • economic boost
  • infrastructure
  • national pride
  • cultural showcase
  • inspire a generation
  • temporary boost
  • environmental concerns
  • sustainable planning
  • public funds
  • divert resources
  • tourism influx
  • job opportunities
  • sports development
  • public health
  • construction
  • strategic investment
  • global audience
  • hospitality
  • public services
  • cost-benefit analysis
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