In many parts of the world, people search for family history. some people think that finding for the previous generations is a thing to do,but others think that it is better to be focus on present and future generations.discuss both views and show your opinion.

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Investing time and effort in genealogy can be fascinating for some people, while others believe current and imminent groups deserve more attention. While each view has its merits, there is no reason why the two should be mutually exclusive. Tracing family roots back in time and compiling a genealogical tree demonstrating ancestors and descendants can be a worthwhile undertaking for a better understanding of family roots and creating a sense of belonging for a family. While
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mobility as many do not maintain the same strong family ties that the previous tribes did. As families extend across regions and in some cases borders, extended families may feel a lack of pertaining to a particular place and being able to share and celebrate their family heritage can help them feel connected to their historic roots. By no means are the two views mutually exclusive
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In fact, the pursuit of understanding our past can help ground us in the present and launch a successful ultimate based on a solid knowledge of where we originate from and those who came before us. Genealogy can in fact reconnect us and yet allow us to explore the subsequent safe in the knowledge of who we are.
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