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Some schools start teaching a foreign language in primary school years. Do the advantages of teaching foreign languages to young children outweigh its disadvantages?

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Many individual schools have encouraged foreign
language
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 learning at an earlier stage.
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,
this
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 policy can offer some advantages along with some disadvantages. It is clear that young
children
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 acquire
language
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 much more easily than teenagers. Their brains are programmed to learn their
mother
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 tongue, which
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 facilitates learning another
language
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 so that they can learn foreign
languages
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 easier. At a young age,
children
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 love to explore and learn new things and learning a new
language
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 is
also
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 a way to stimulate curiosity and love to discover new things. Acquiring foreign
languages
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 can
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 help
children
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 to understand other cultures. Learning a foreign
language
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 early
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 makes it easier for
children
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 to develop that
language
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 after they go to middle school or high school.
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, there are some downsides that can be considered. Primary school teachers may not have the necessary
language
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 skills or they may not be well trained for those particular
languages
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. In some situations, it becomes very stressful for the child to have to learn another
language
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in addition
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 to the
mother
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 tongue. Some researchers have shown from their studies that
children
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 who learn foreign
languages
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 at early ages have difficulty deciding which
language
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 to speak and may learn nothing at all.
Children
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 may not be able to speak their
mother
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 tongue when they are exposed to a foreign
language
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 too early with a greater frequency than their
mother
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language
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. In summary, a foreign
language
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 teaching policy can be adopted in primary schools, which can
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 benefit society culturally and economically. Young
children
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’s access to foreign
languages
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 may be easier to achieve.

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