In many parts of the world, people search for family history. some people think that finding for the previous generations is a thing to do, but others think that it is better to be focus on present and future generations. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It has been witnessed that studying genealogy has become a controversial topic for the
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decade.
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, a section of
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reckons that fathoming
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the history
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of
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the family
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has turned out to be beneficial,
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however
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another group of individuals deem that searching out about ancestors is
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worthless activity. In
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view, it has medical advantages for a family,
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, another viewpoint suggests that our upcoming events and happenings have
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influence on a millennial’s character, which is
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superior in my perspective. On the
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hand, indubitably, knowing about
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's forefathers,
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past life is extremely significant from
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a medical
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perspective. Since a few families have some hereditary
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such
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as Thalassemia, diabetes and hypertension that run down from generation to generation, in order to avoid any
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complication of affected genes, people are involving themselves in
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the study
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of genes.
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,
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can know the glorious past of their ancestors and their contribution towards society.
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, they can better understand their origin, moral and ethical values and carry their legacy forward.
On the other hand
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, myriad reasons make a section of people stress
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the present
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and future. First and foremost
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our present defines our
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further
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future
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life. If people have
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right approach filled with daring thoughts, optimism and zeal for
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growth, indubitably the
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development of an inhabitant
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society is inevitable.
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, looking at the past lineage would have too little impact on our today. An example of
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, it is revealed that a majority of renowned entrepreneurs concur that the parameter of
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in shaping our upcoming life is not accurate rather
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today's course of action should be a benchmark for tomorrow.
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,
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knowing about the previous generation is
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way of keeping on our family's values and
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apply
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acts as a curative measure, the paramount significance of staying in
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the present
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and future for
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the holistic
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progress of
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the community
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must be acknowledged.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ancestry
  • genealogy
  • heritage
  • lineage
  • descendants
  • forebears
  • progenitors
  • legacy
  • identity
  • cultural background
  • inspiration
  • life lessons
  • practical
  • beneficial
  • unpleasant truths
  • familial conflicts
  • moderate approach
  • prioritizing
  • delving into
  • addressing current needs
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