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You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organizer. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have

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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
 missive to let you know that I am selected for the
one month
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 training program
to
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 the UK and my employee ID is DM33972.
However
,I am interested
for
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 the organiser role as I am always looking for
the
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 job that involves the betterment of
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society. I am curious to know the
further
 details of the event and the role of the organiser.So,that I can check my capabilities and could apply
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. I want some information related to the event as well as some details about the qualities the company is looking
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 their organiser.
Furthermore
,I have run an NGO in my
last
 year internship
besides
 it I have
an
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experience
of
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handling
social
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event
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 in which my role was to educate the poor children of the region and after completing my duties,the NGO awarded me with the best intern title. Please feel free to contact me. Look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Haman
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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