Last year you attended a presentation skill course at the Sydney College of Australia. Your new employer has asked you to provide copies of your reports and assignments as quickly as possible. Write to the director of the school and request these documents.

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Dear Mr Daniel Defoe, I am writing

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letter to ask your favour. I am John Abraham. I completed a presentation skill

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at your college

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year and my student ID number is 213423. My instructor was Mr David Brown and Barbara Catharine. During the

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, I had made several reports and done assignments that I need very urgently. In the

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month, I am going to join a new organization. Seeing my curriculum vita that I have completed the presentation skills

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, my new employer asked me to submit copies of my reports and assignments. But unfortunately, I do not find them. Maybe the copies were somehow missed when I moved to

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new city for the job.

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, it would be very appreciated if you send me copies of reports and assignments that I had done during the

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as early as possible. And I would like to bear the postal charges. I look forward to hearing you soon. Yours sincerely, John Abraham

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Last year you attended a presentation skill course at the Sydney College of Australia. Your new employer has asked you to provide copies of your reports and assignments as quickly as possible. Write to the director of the school and request these documents.

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