You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work. Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you have been working. In your letter: describe the work you have been doing explain why you can no longer do this work recommend another person who is interested in the work

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you to inform you that I will not be able to continue doing social work anymore. I was extremely glad that I could assist my community during

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long period. Let me explain my situation, as you have remembered, I am a volunteer and I have been cleaning schools' yards since I have graduated from school.

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, we have been planting seeds for providing a green environment for the children. That was my passion during the

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years but now I must omit to do voluntary work because of my health issues. The problem related to my bones, I get tired very quickly.

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, I would be glad to recommend my neighbour for

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kind of job. Her name is Anna, and she is very organised and driven. She will be a good fit for the local community and could replace me as well. Again I would like to apologize for the inconvenience. If you require any other information, please do not hesitate to contact me. Yours sincerely, Agape

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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