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An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in devolped countries. What problems does this the cause? What can be done to deal with this situation?

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Today, many positions
such
 as medics and school tutors are moving away to
work
 in other
countries
 because they can not earn enough money due to the economic country position. In
this
 essay, I will explain the impact of
this
 problem and the solutions that could be adopted. Foremost, the increment of brain-drain from developing to developed
countries
 is becoming a serious problem, because there
is
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 not enough
people
 who can
work
,
consequently
 a decrement of life quality.
For
example
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 the presences of
qualify
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 teachers allow students to learn subjects and education, is necessary for
theme
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them
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 to be in contact with tutors in order to achieve literacy, and develop skills to
became
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 good citizens.
In addition
 positions
such
 as medic have a great impact
for
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healthiness
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 of the locals. If the number of doctors is not enough to cover the shift,
for instance
, many children can not receive medicines and cures on time.
This
 may
result
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dengerous
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dangerous
 situations for the developing
countries
.
However
, governments could help by investments to
encorage
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encourage
 employees to stay. Throw helps,
such
 as investment in human resources or facilities,
government
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the government
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 can create another kind of
work
's environment where the
people
 are evaluated for
theire
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their
 impact of
theire
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their
 job have in the society. Investments in
this
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these
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 fields could make
the
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a
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 difference in order to encourage
people
 to
work
 even if their salaries are not reaching those of the developed
countries
. In conclusion,
work
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workplace
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place
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places
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 in Western
countries
such
 as schools and hospitals need more and more
people
. To prevent the
lackness
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blackness
 of
people
 in significant fields governments should encourage employees by economic helps to do not leave the country.
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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.

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  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • One of the first problems of the...
  • Another problem that needs to be considered...
  • A possible solution to this problem would be...
  • One immediate practical solution is to...

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