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People are using a lot of online language translation apps. Are there more advantages than disadvantages to such services ?

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In
this
 era, online
language
translation
 applications
such
 as google translate or
duolingo
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 can be accessed easily and fastly.
This
 essay will
be discuss
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 how
translation
apps
 more present
unfavorable
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 value compared to its
favorable
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 value, especially
on
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 the long term
First
 of all, online
language
translation
apps
 will be helpful to
people
 who want to understand a new
language
 instantly. Since the ease of access
translation
apps
 only on through mobile phones makes
people
 get information about
language
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 that they can not understand.
For instance
,
translation
apps
 are useful to tourists who travel to a country or a region.
Second
 of all, the
people
 who use the application too frequently will become lazy to look for new words
in
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which
it
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makes
people
 not improve their
language
 skills for
a
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 long term.
Therefore
,
translation
apps
 are strongly not recommended for students who want to learn new languages.
In addition
, the disadvantage of using online
translation
apps
 is sometimes the
translation
 of
language
 will give a misperception, because the
apps
 only translate
a
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text, sentences, or complex sentences without involved context. To sum up, the benefit of online
translation
apps
 makes
people
 understand
language
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the language
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 easily;
however
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,however
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 the
translation
apps
 are not recommended for
people
 who can learn
new
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a new
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 skill
language
.
Moreover
, the
translation
apps
 give more disadvantages than its advantages.
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