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Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefit that it will replace face - to - face education. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both view and give your opinion

Acquiring knowledge virtually has become extremely popular in the present times.
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 many individuals believe that there are various advantages
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 might overtake traditional learning in the future, a sizeable group thinks that the traditional method cannot be replaced. I believe that the use of the classroom might
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, but it cannot be replaced.
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 essay will discuss both views and substantiate my view in the course of the essay. To commence with, virtual learning is widely implemented because it is convenient and cost-effective. It provides us with the opportunity to obtain an education without the hassle of travelling. Students,
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 the comfort of their home, resulting in saving time that might have been spent on commuting in the past.
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, learning online can
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 be considered cost-efficient.
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 of spending an immense amount of college funds, we can attain the same level of qualifications at a cheaper price as it does not involve infrastructure.
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, traditional learning offers guided learning and hands-on experience l. Classroom teaching practices assist students in obtaining better study skills,
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 as organising and gathering reliable information
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 constant interaction with the teacher, resulting in improved academic achievement.
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, it helps in gaining practical knowledge through sessions in laboratories that are not a part of digital practices.
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, pupils are provided with constant guidance during
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 teaching
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 acquiring real-time experience. In conclusion,
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 online classes might seem beneficial in terms of convenience
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 being budget-friendly, classroom education.
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, I think that face-to-face classes are not replaceable.

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