You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to study/work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter:

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am
writting
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writing
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letter to inform you that my room number is 13 and I am facing some
issue
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with my roommate. He
wake
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up late at night and
pplayes
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plays
played
music
very
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high volume. So I am not able to do my
study
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during so much distraction and
some time
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sometimes
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he drinks and speak very
laoudly
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loudly
. I am so much disturbed
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my roommate because of his bad habits. He played music at night time with very high volume so I am not able to do my
study
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and learn anything.
Sometime
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he annoying
on
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me without any reason. With all
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this
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things I am not able to contrate on my
study
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or other works. I belong to
very
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poor family so my parents
have
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not so much money for my
study
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. My exams are very important for me to clear. So it's my humble request to you please change my room with other students, so I can more
constrate
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concentrate
on my
study
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. And feel my parents proud. Looking forward to hearing you soon.
Your
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Faithfully, Matthew Hayden
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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