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Government should fund scientific research rather than commercial organisations. To what extend do you agree or disagree with the statement?

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The diagram illustrates 100
years
 distribution of people aged 65 and over between the
USA
,
Sweden
 and
Japan
. Overall,
Japan
 starts with the lowest percentage of distribution and will end as the highest in 2040 while the
USA
 is the highest at the beginning of 1940 and is predicted to be the least at the end of the period.
Furthermore
, the proportion of elderly people started at exactly 5% in
Japan
, it,
however
, dropped steadily for the
first
 10
years
 and remained constant at 3% for about 12
years
. From there, it rose gradually until it reached 10%. The distribution of old people in
Japan
 is expected to rise sharply from 10% in 2030 to more than 25% in 2040.
Moreover
,
Japan
 is
also
 predicted to overtake
Sweden
 and
USA
although
 it started on a low note.
USA
 and
Sweden
 proportion started at below 10% in 1940 but increased steadily for the
first
 20
years
. From there, they both decreased again before the year 2000.
Sweden
 ,
however
, overtook the
USA
 from below 15% to 20% and is predicted to be the
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 highest in 2040.
On the other hand
, the
USA
 remained
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constant
 for a few
years
 and peaked though it is assumed to be the
last
 in 2040.

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