Nowadays families move to different countries for work. Some people think it has a negative effect on children, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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In today's modern world to earn money family go to other countries. Few people believe it creates a bad impact on
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whereas some do not.
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, it is challenging for the person to adapt to a new place while I disagree that moving will affect a child's development.
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,
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are more prone to adapting to new cultures, places and situations. They have the capability to make friends easily and they manage to develop new ideas more quickly than adults.
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, if a kid has to move with the parent from a developing country to a developed country. It is not only beneficial for
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overall development but
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nurture new skills.
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, different cultures and traditions will
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increase knowledge.
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, nowadays the world is becoming globalized. No matter what is our ethnicity, we can be successful.
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, many businesses are done abroad are making people richer. There are many international companies who are recruiting new families for communicating and transporting goods.
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, the family can work and be connected due to our high tech technology easily. Friends and families can be connected via Facebook, Whatsapp. On contrary, moving with family to a different country is stressful. Children are separated from their grandparents. Sometimes it takes time to adapt to the new culture even though the state is well developed. To conclude, I agree with the fact that moving to another place can not only give new experiences but
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gives opportunities for the
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as well.
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, the family can face a situation of being alone without their relatives which can be stressful.
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