The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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The charts depict the maximal and minimal temperatures
in
sunrise Change preposition
at
an
sunset in UK and Correct your spelling
and
Sydney
from 28th December
to 30th December
in 2018.
Overall
, the weather condition was warmer in Sydney
than in London
. For both cities, the degree was highest in 30th and 29th in Sydney
and London
respectively.
In
28th Change preposition
On
December
, London
's highest temperature was 9 degrees
and the lowest was 4 degrees
. There was a sharp rise in daylight warmth to 13 degrees
the next
day. Conversely
, the day after that, the weather cooled down to 10. In addition
, there was
only around 4 Change the verb form
were
degrees
in night hours but this
dropped to 3 on the 29th. It soared marginally on 30th December
.
Sydney
described a steady upward trend compared to London
. Friday was its most plummet
point in temperatures with a maximal 26 Wrong verb form
plummeting
degrees
and minimal
17. There was a gradual rise Correct article usage
a minimal
for
about 2 Change preposition
of
degrees
after it. The highest point hit on 30th
with 31 Correct article usage
the 30th
degrees
in the daytime and 19 degrees
in the nighttime.
In conclusion, it is obvious that the UK did not receive sunshine as much as Sydney
. However
, the temperatures measured on December
30th were relatively highest in both nations.Submitted by soesandioo.drssdo on
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