To meet the growing needs of food for the increasing population, country should make use of edible insects as foods. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but affect negatively the nature too. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects?

Insects

are

the

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significant creatures of

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nature that forms a complete ecosystem. Now that the

population

of Earth is exceeding day by day and

food

scarcity has started and

people

.

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Hence

,

people

see these significant creatures as a solution to

this

problem

.

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essay will look at the benefits and drawbacks of consuming

insects

. Researchers found that the total

population

of

insects

in

this

world is more than

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the

population

of

people

in

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this

planet. Using

insects

for

food

can help us recover from the scarcity of

food

in a healthy way rather than artificially. The total amount of

insects

in

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this

planet are more than enough to

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feed the

people

of

this

whole planet. Eating

insects

are

also

healthy as much as eating animal foods are, so eating

insects

cause no

problem

to the human body but provides enough nutrients even more than

that

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we get from common

food

.

Although

the consumption of

insects

may be a solution to

food

scarcity

but

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it actually indirectly opens

door

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for another crisis.

Insects

are

important

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part of the environment, disappearance or reduction in

its

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population

may lead to a huge collapse in the ecosystem.

For example

,

insects

play an important role in

growth

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the growth

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and distribution of plants as

insects

are a means of

transports

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transport

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for pollens grains.

WIth

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the reduction of

insects

the plants and all greenery around us

also

reduces. In conclusion,

insects

are a substantial part of the ecosystem. Consuming

insects

as

food

might solve one of our

problem

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might rises another

problem

with it, which may even lead

lead

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to loss of what is left of

at

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Earth.