To meet the growing needs of food for the increasing population, country should make use of edible insects as foods. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but affect negatively the nature too. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects?

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significant creatures of

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nature that forms a complete ecosystem. Now that the

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of Earth is exceeding day by day and

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scarcity has started and

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see these significant creatures as a solution to

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problem

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essay will look at the benefits and drawbacks of consuming

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. Researchers found that the total

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of

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world is more than

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planet. Using

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for

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can help us recover from the scarcity of

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in a healthy way rather than artificially. The total amount of

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planet are more than enough to

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feed the

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whole planet. Eating

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healthy as much as eating animal foods are, so eating

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cause no

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to the human body but provides enough nutrients even more than

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we get from common

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the consumption of

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may be a solution to

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scarcity

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it actually indirectly opens

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for another crisis.

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part of the environment, disappearance or reduction in

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population

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may lead to a huge collapse in the ecosystem.

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play an important role in

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and distribution of plants as

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are a means of

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for pollens grains.

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the reduction of

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the plants and all greenery around us

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reduces. In conclusion,

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are a substantial part of the ecosystem. Consuming

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as

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might solve one of our

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might rises another

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with it, which may even lead

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to loss of what is left of

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Earth.