Once children start school,teachers have more influence on their intellectual and social development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Who influences more to
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,parents,
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or friends is the most debated statement after they start going to school over all the forums on social media sites.some people are of opinion that
teachers
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have a major share in shaping their intellectual and social development and I agree on a bigger part of it as it works in real
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for the majority of
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after getting into school. After starting school
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obey,appreciate and follow their mentors in each and every field and subject and try to be one of them.On the number of ,instances
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become their ideal to follow and
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try to be like them, follow their idealogy throughout their
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.On the other hands
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also
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try to provide examples for
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by matching their words and deads of
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by following rules and regulations as well as being honest ,trustworthy, hard-working and intelligent,keep updating for their knowledge horizons.
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parents and peers influence
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their share remains on lower site than that of
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.Parents at home have to shape
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's social and spiritual backgrounds because they obey them in that aspects.Friends for the majority of instances guide
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in personal habits and involvement in sports and other curricular activities because they go with the company of peers for
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activities. To conclude in
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's all directional development everyone contributes by providing support,guide and company but
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outweigh among all by constantly remodelling and redirecting the
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for their better and successful career ahead and making them better citizens and workers for the country.

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