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Most schools offer some type of physical education program to their students. Why physical education important? Should physical education classes be required or optional?

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Physical
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 study is provided to pupils in many schools.
this
 program plays
vital
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a vital
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 role for
children
 based on their physical and mental well-being. As per my perspective, physical
education
 programs should be mandatory in schools.
To begin
 with, physical
education
 is essential because of various factors.
Firstly
,
such
 programs make
children
 fit and healthy
for instance
,
students
 who do physical work would be away from obesity and some other disease because their immune system will become
sttong
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strong
. along with that pupils will be able to focus on their studies with
less
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 absences because of sickness.
moreover
, physical games make kids active and remove their stress
level
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.
In addition
, physical games make
children
 away from electronic gadgets
such
 as mobile,
Computer
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computers
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 and television.
Therefore
, it is apparent that physical
education
 is vital for
children
 On the other side, Physical
education
 should be necessary for
children
 rather than making it optional.
Firstly
,
students
 learn teamwork and cooperation while playing with other mates which is very useful in every
field
 of life. There are several jobs these days which require the person to be fit and strong along with
intelligence
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.
Furthermore
, some student wants to make their career in the athletic
field
 so physical
education
 program will be able to help
such
students
 rather than wasting their time in
non-interesting
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the non-interesting
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field
 because these days there are very less people who are available to guide
students
 to choose their right
field
 and to give directions due to which
children
 suffer and end up choosing the wrong
field
. overall, Physical study plays an essential role in
students
 life because it is helpful both physically and mentally due to which
this
 subject should be required in schools.
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