These days many kids spend a lot of their time playing computer games instead of doing sports. What is the cause of this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

It is true that many kids these days tend to spend more time playing computer

games

than doing sports.

This

kind of tendency is caused by some factors. In my view,

this

trend

is a negative development for

this

society.  On the one hand, with the development of technology, many people can use online devices,

for instance

, computers and cell phones with faster internet,

thus

, there are a lot of electrical devices in every house.

Therefore

, the younger generation can face those kinds of situations more than in the past, and they can easily get along with

games

.

Furthermore

,

students

in modern society are very busy because of their subjects,

thus

, they have to save their wasted time.

Consequently

,

games

that are not very limited in space and time have become one of the best means to play with friends.

However

, I believe

this

trend

is unacceptable in

this

society.

To begin

with, it is true that a lot of activities are necessary to keep healthy,

therefore

,

students

in the past were quite healthy because they normally played and did sports outside.

However

,

students

these days play computer

games

with their friends,

instead

of doing sport,

thus

, their health is getting worse.

Therefore

, they will struggle with various diseases,

such

as

,

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overweight.

Accordingly

, the government has to spend more money on the student's health.

Consequently

, they cannot invest enough money in other sectors, and their welfare will be poor. In conclusion, the

students

tend to play computer

games

than sports. I believe

this

trend

comes from various reasons and

this

trend

will cause a negative influence on various aspects.