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You have just an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other you don't fully agree with this opinion Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper in your letter say which points in the article you about explain ways in which year Town Centre is different from most other towns centres offer to give a guided tour of your Town Centre to the writer of the article

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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 letter to provide the opinions regarding your article related to the
town
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centre
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 of
London
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 which was published in The Times on 2 May.
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 of all, I completely associate with the data related to the construction of the
town
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centre
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 of
London
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, in terms of its architecture, amenities and a few more.
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, you mentioned the establishment date
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 correct even though some citizens still date don’t have any clue about it.
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, one key point you wrote is that all the
town
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 centres in Britain seem similar to each others’. I do not agree with
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 as our
town
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centre
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 is different in terms of construction. The neighbouring city, Cardiff has old-style construction whereas our one is modern. Beyond that
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London
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town
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centre
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 has an underground tube station which brings its unique identity. None other station has
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 type of facilities in the vicinity of their
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centre
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.
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, I would like to offer you one day tour of
London
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 city so whatever information related to the
town
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centre
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 will be cleared. If you decide to visit my city, please contact me. An open line of communication on
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 matter will greatly help out. Thanks Best regards, David
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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