Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world. What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions.

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that

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whether students should obtain some information related to food and how to make it or it is

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completely

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waste

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of time and they should put their time

for

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more valuable subjects. In

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essay , I will look at both sides of the

arguments

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and draw a conclusion. My opinion is

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included. On the one hand , the majority of parents hold firmly to the belief that their children need to acquire some knowledge about cooking .

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is mainly because

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to be informed of the quality and ingredients of certain foods and try to

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pursue

a healthy eating habits

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healthy eating habits

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.

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of choosing fast foods and high-calorie meals and snacks , learn to prepare

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by themselves.

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, they can make a hamburger with high-quality ingredients and

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healthy

method

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like steaming or boiling to make the best out of it .

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, others claim that there

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a broad range of valuable studies regarding medicine, physics,

mathematics

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and mathematics

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which are far more necessary for people

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than cooking

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should not

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them

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.

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, they argue that students can easily buy

ready-meals

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or their parents can bring healthy foods for them without bothering themselves to make food

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that

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can save a lot of

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for studying important subjects. In conclusion ,

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some individuals encourage students to take part in cooking classes , others believe that it is a waste of time

subject

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for them and their task is to

persue

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things that are more vital .In my point of

view

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both sides of the

debates

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are true to some extent and we need to pay attention to every

aspects

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of our life and

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cooking is as valuable as studying mathematics.