You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to editor of magazine Correct the information in article Explain why it is important for magazine to give correct information Suggest what the magazine should do

Dear Sir/Madam, I m writing
this
letter with regards to a request for correction of a mistake in your
magazine
about Peshawar city. I am a regular viewer of your
magazine
for the
last
5 years and I enjoy reading it immensely. One week before I saw a piece of information about my native town Peshawar which was not correct. You mentioned the bad condition of motels over here for visitors which is a piece of fake news. In reality , Peshawar had many motels which are, specially designed for the comfort of travellers and their owners take care of both cleanliness and security to overcome the dissatisfaction of the guests who come and stay here. I am not confirmed from where you got
this
information,
however
,
this
fake news will affect the reputation of the
magazine
. I would be grateful to u could either remove
this
false news or do an excuse to the viewers in the upcoming
magazine
. Your prompt response will be awaited. Yours faithfully, Sana
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