You share your room with another studer in the college hostel. You find it very difficult to study there because he or She always has parties and friends visiting. write a letter to the hostel warden complaining about your displeasure with the roommate.

Dear sir, Writing
this
epistle to bring your attention to the reckless behaviour of my roommate which is impacting my study . For the
last
2 months, I am staying in
Room
no 1004 and sharing a
room
with John Gendo , a student in the Arts department. Since starting he invited his friends to a
room
for parties and annoyed the whole hostel by making loud noise but
this
time he has crossed the line.
Last
night, numerous friends of his came to the hostel
room
to celebrate his birthday and all of them were drunk. Not only they were screaming loudly but dancing vulgarly
also
. Politely, I asked him to stop
this
and raised my concern that exams are coming and Noise made by his groups impacting my study but he did not bother. Not only
this
, but he
also
talked to me rudely on that day and was not ready to stop that. For a long time I was thinking of complaining to you but
this
time I could not stop myself as my study is impacting that will create obstacles in my future so It would be helpful either if you Warn him or allot me some another
room
. Hope you will understand my situation and take swift and prompt action against him. Yours faithfully, Ritu
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