Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your opinion.

There are
people
who like to sample new things as well as some
people
choose
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to keep doing things who they are familiar
.
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In the
world
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many
people
love to travel, recognize new places and new countries. They do meet the novel
people
and make friends in different countries. These
people
have nice social skills and frank character
that is
why it is easier for them to communicate. These
people
are always ready for change.
For example
, they
people
do not afraid to drop everything and go somewhere places.
Furthermore
,
such
people
easily get started the new hobby, so they get many of life experience. They spend a lot of energy
,
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but get no less. They just live variety
lives
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.
Besides
all
this
, do not forget about
people
who do not like change. They do not like new acquaintances and new places, because they are not comfortable there and it is hard for them to get used to something new. They have
the
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old friends and things who give them pleasure. Some of them are afraid to make new acquaintances, but if
people
who
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just don't want to do it.
This
is not bad, they just like to
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feel
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fell
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feel
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stable in life. Both types of
people
do what they like and what makes them happy. Just some
people
more
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active and some less. It depends
of
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their characters and outlook on life.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Novelty
  • Routine
  • Comfort zone
  • Risk-taker
  • Risk-averse
  • Enrichment
  • Personal growth
  • Innovation
  • Creativity
  • Stability
  • Tradition
  • Habit
  • Familiarity
  • Personal enrichment
  • Life stages
  • Fulfilling
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