Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your opinion.

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people
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. Talking about the
first
sort of
people
, they will be energetic and creative. They
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creative in any situation, those
people
like to try new
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challenges
and other different
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. Because, the
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attitudes
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of that
people
are suitable to invent new
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and they are never afraid to bad and terrible condition. They are always ready
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their destiny.
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type of
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people
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to do themselves' sure. In my opinion, that species of the
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do not like the risk, do not like the new
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challenges
, with the most possible, they do not trust the luck. Those
people
trust only their reality,
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poverty
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and knowing
things
or these types of
people
are
people
who love their lives very much, I think,
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they always like to go where they can see safety. In conclusion, in my opinion, the
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every
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people
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Novelty
  • Routine
  • Comfort zone
  • Risk-taker
  • Risk-averse
  • Enrichment
  • Personal growth
  • Innovation
  • Creativity
  • Stability
  • Tradition
  • Habit
  • Familiarity
  • Personal enrichment
  • Life stages
  • Fulfilling
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