Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In view of the booming technology,
computers
have been the fundamental tools in nowadays
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Thus
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computers
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into the curriculum. Still, some people consider that teaching relays on
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risky to
students
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Hence
, the pros and cons will be discussed followed by a personal opinion.
To begin
with,
computers
can make classes more efficient. As
students
usually have lots of paperwork, finding the correct paper may be
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and slowed the teaching process.
Therefore
, putting the work and notes in
computers
can save the time spend on finding.
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students
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can improve the efficiency in class.
On the contrary
,
computers
may be a disturbance and result in
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. As some elderly teachers may not be familiar with
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may take
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time to figure out how to duel with
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Students
may
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rely on visual elements and be reluctant to read or learn in
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way.
For example
,
students
can play video games or water TV shows more easily with
computers
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,
students
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in class and be loose in
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. In conclusion,
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computers
into classrooms may be risky,
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can still be
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useful
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to improve
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efficiency.
Moreover
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computer’s programs
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been
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vital step among lots of
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and without
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, the
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generation may be hard to survive.
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computers
into school is important in my opinion.
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