Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your opinion.
Some
people
are interested in trying new things
like visiting new places or eating variety
of new dishes while others continue doing the same Add an article
a variety
things
that they familiar
with. In my opinion, Add a missing verb
are familiar
people
who keeps
similarity, do wrong because they lose Change the verb form
keep
opportunity
to enjoy Add an article
the opportunity
an opportunity
the
life by trying new Correct article usage
apply
things
, visiting to
sightseeing and tasting new foods.
On the one hand, some Remove the preposition
apply
people
like to try new places to visit that they have not been just
because they want to see or to try something especially new. Change preposition
to just
For example
, people
attend to new dangerous forests that have wild animals which can attack any time or lake that have crocodiles because they want to feel fear. They want to have new emotions by doing this kind
of new Fix the agreement mistake
these kinds
journeys
and Fix the agreement mistake
journey
adventures
. Some Fix the agreement mistake
adventure
people
also
like to taste different types of food which they have never tried, to discover new tastes or when they hate the similar foods that they eat every time.
On the other hand
, most people
like doing the same things
, they like and do not want to change them. They do similar things
because they are afraid of bad consequences that might come if they do something new. Another reason is that they enjoy things
that they do, for
example
they do not want to visit another place that they always go Add a comma
,example
and
keep eating similar foods because they like them.
In conclusion, Change preposition
to and
people
should do what they are adopted, if they love feeling new emotions every moment of their life they should attend new places where they can take these feelings. Keeping similarity
is Fix the agreement mistake
similarities
also
good but not the best way of enjoying life.Submitted by Weallneedit9 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite