Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your opinion.

Some
people
are interested in trying new
things
like visiting new places or eating
variety
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of new dishes while others continue doing the same
things
that they
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with. In my opinion,
people
who
keeps
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similarity, do wrong because they lose
opportunity
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to enjoy
the
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life by trying new
things
, visiting
to
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sightseeing and tasting new foods. On the one hand, some
people
like to try new places to visit that they have not been
just
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because they want to see or to try something especially new.
For example
,
people
attend to new dangerous forests that have wild animals which can attack any time or lake that have crocodiles because they want to feel fear. They want to have new emotions by doing
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of new
journeys
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and
adventures
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. Some
people
also
like to taste different types of food which they have never tried, to discover new tastes or when they hate the similar foods that they eat every time.
On the other hand
, most
people
like doing the same
things
, they like and do not want to change them. They do similar
things
because they are afraid of bad consequences that might come if they do something new. Another reason is that they enjoy
things
that they do,
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they do not want to visit another place that they always go
and
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keep eating similar foods because they like them. In conclusion,
people
should do what they are adopted, if they love feeling new emotions every moment of their life they should attend new places where they can take these feelings. Keeping
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is
also
good but not the best way of enjoying life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Novelty
  • Routine
  • Comfort zone
  • Risk-taker
  • Risk-averse
  • Enrichment
  • Personal growth
  • Innovation
  • Creativity
  • Stability
  • Tradition
  • Habit
  • Familiarity
  • Personal enrichment
  • Life stages
  • Fulfilling
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