Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your opinion.

Some
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are interested in trying new
stuff
like visiting new places or eating a variety of new dishes
while
others continue doing the same
stuff
that they are familiar with. In my opinion,
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who keep
similarity
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similarities
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, do wrong because they lose the opportunity to enjoy life by trying new
stuff
, visiting sightseeing and tasting new foods. On the one hand, some
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like to try new places to visit that they have not been to just because they want to see or to try something especially new.
For example
, folk attend to new dangerous forests that have wild animals which can attack
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time or
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lakes
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that have crocodiles because they want to feel fear. They want to have new emotions by doing
this
kind of new journey and adventure . Some public
also
like to taste different types of food which they have never tried, to discover new tastes or when they hate the similar foods that they eat every time.
On the other hand
, most
society
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like doing the same
stuff
, they like
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do not want to change
them
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it
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. They do similar
stuff
because they are afraid of
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consequences that might come if they do something new. Another reason is that they enjoy
stuff
that they do, for ,example they do not want to visit another place that they always go to and keep eating similar foods because they like them. In conclusion,
public
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should do what they are adopted, if they love feeling new emotions every moment of their life they should attend new places where they can take these feelings. Keeping similarities is
also
good but not the best way of enjoying life.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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  • thirdly
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  • moreover
  • also
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  • therefore
  • however
  • although
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  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Novelty
  • Routine
  • Comfort zone
  • Risk-taker
  • Risk-averse
  • Enrichment
  • Personal growth
  • Innovation
  • Creativity
  • Stability
  • Tradition
  • Habit
  • Familiarity
  • Personal enrichment
  • Life stages
  • Fulfilling
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