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Some people believe that it is best to accept bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage if money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Describe both these views and give your own openion.

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Within our entire
life
, we meet
both
 good
times
 and bad
times
as a result
 of our activities and the results of negligence.
However
, some
of
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people
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the people
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 in
the
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society think that we have to accept the hard situations while others
think
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 manage every situation if those are bad, with our effort. I personally believe that
both
 of these views are true and within
this
essay
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 I will discuss
both
. On one hand, it is important to accept hard situations in our
life
 because it teaches lessons
which
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that
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 are not forever forgotten by us.
Furthermore
, we can understand
people
 who are with us when we facing
in
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difficult
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a difficult
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situation
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situations
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.
Usually
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people
 don’t like to help others, those who are in trouble. Even though always like to be with them if they have enough recourse. It is advisable to stay away from that kind of
people
 because sometimes we face problems due to their selfishness while dealing with
group
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a group
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 of
people
.
For instance
, in school
time
 of me, I faced
lot
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 of financial problems while most of our relations avoid us and only one of my aunts helped me, so today I’m only dealing with her.
On the other hand
, we have to overcome the bad situation to get a successful
life
 while it increases confidence for future targets.
People
 pass hard
times
 because
not
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 only our acts but
also
 other environmental factors which we can’t change. So we have to stay strong and try as best to move from hard to good as soon as possible.
Moreover
,
richest
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 persons in the world had passed
long
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a long
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period
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 of
time
 with
poor
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the poor
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 and they overcome that
time
 with their effort and become rich.
Finally
, I want to say,
life
 is not passing smooth, so we have
both
 bad and good
times
. So we have to accept
the
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 hard
time
 and work hard on it to become
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a success
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success
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successful
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.
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