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Summerise the information, selecting and reporting

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The map describes the changes
a
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city
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 in two different periods in 1950 and at present. Overall, it can be seen that there have been several developments
such
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 as
lake
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 and main road. With regards to 1950,
this
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city
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 was tiny only a few attractions, to the northeast was the river and the southeast had the airport. In the middle of the
city
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 had the bridge and
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 was connected the major road from the south towards north had the business district and residential area, the government building was on the south side of
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city
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. Turning to the present day, it can be seen that the
lake
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 has been built in the middle of the
city
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 and the residential area has been expanded.
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, the business district has been extended between the
lake
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 and the government building. A new government building has been built on the south. Situated in the southeast the airport has been expanded and a new bridge has been built between the
lake
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 and the main road of the southern.
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